No problem... I enjoyed reading your posts...There's a bit of description and it has a writer's logic
I myself enjoy writing,so it's nice to see a fellow "writer"
Back to the topic...
There were two of them,in the small room...The smell was real bad,but Minja almost forgot about it...Her nose grew accostomed to it,she guessed...Reno was somewhere in the school,she was getting more and more worried about him...And Vince ran out,babbling something about emergency power...He had been gone for an half a hour,maybe more...-I'm going to look for Vince-she said to Shady...-You stay put,and wait for Reno-she was at the door,when she stopped...-And please,take care...-She smiled...
The trip to Room 70 was a short one,mostly because of the lack of flesh eaters...Vince must have shot at least a ten of them.When she entered the security room she was shocked..-Oh my good,Vince! Nooo!-She dropped in front of the blackish,scorched remains of Vince..-Why? -She cried...She started to cry...-He was young,and a good soldier...I shouldn't have left him on his own...Oh my good I'm sorry...-
When she finally stopped crying,she got on her feet with an angry look on her face-I swear that those responsabile are going to pay for this,for everything...-Before she left,she put Vince's body on the desc,with the thomspon in his hands...-Rest in peace Vince-...
So,now there were three..