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Its actually not as bad as you think. ITs not terrific, but you didn't embarass yourself. A couple of things to work on... Character Development-Let the readers know who the characters really are. You wouldn't believe how much it adds to the story. Paragraphing- My first fic was...

I think I laughed for ten minutes, and **** a brick with it. I was in the cemetary. The women that is a bit heavier, and wears brown comes out. I disarm her by shooting the knife out of her hand, and walk towards her. She screams, I back away to avoid getting strangled. I did that for about...

BUMP Chapters 1-1, 1-2, 1-3, and 1-4 will be posted here either this week, or next week.

The ones that turn invisible, that aren't a black color. ;)

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Captain Courageous~ Ah, np brah. Though I don't think I added you on XBL. My tag is tlane17

darkness~ If I had a 360 (I was borrowing one from a friend for a while, who sold it) I would gladly play with you. I'll let you know when I get one. ;)

Right... Go to mums' grab mum, kill Philip *Sorry Philip* go to Liz's, grab Liz, go to the Winchester, have a nice cold pint, and wait for all of this to blow over. How's that for a fried slice of gold? Yeah, Boooiiieeee! *clashes shovel and crickett bad*

"Ashes of Umbrella" Prologue posted.

MAybe in another version besides the one for the PS2, because I would have more blue than anything. The first time you encounter the Novistadors (roughly translates to "No-Sighters") in the sewer, I always snipe the first four or so, who never see me. They don't drop blue eyes. In fact, the only...

Lemme be the one to tell ya, HUNK is the easiest to get the five star with. ;) I like the way the Blacktail (Springfield Armory XD) sounds and handles. I highly dislike the uber-fire rate it has, and is the prime reason I never fully upgrade it to exclusive.

Well, that isn't even close to as much of a chore as actually getting it...

I order you to check your nearest ten bookstores for a copy of the Zombie Survival Guide. Steel toe boots, no long hair, tight, keval-based fabric cloths, laser sights, red dot and low-powered Trijicon sights, PWD-based weapon models, etc, etc. Its got it all. ;) One of my friends has it.

Yeah, I think I'd shoot myself up with large quantities of Las Plagas. :lol:

Can you even begin to fathom how bad that would smell? I mean, like, I'd likely puke my guts up over it.