My Movie

[ford1001]

Hey everyone, this has nothing to do about a RE movie but a movie i have to do for english. What do you all think about this for my plot line, its only short

Bill and Jill's [newly weds] lives are torn apart for ever when a Bill is captured by enemy troops in World War 2. Bob [bill's best mate] comfort Jill about the loss of her husband. On the night of Jill and Bob's wedding, Bill [Jill's now thought deceased husband] steps into to claim what's rightfully his.

what do you all think. Its based in Australia and also WW2. Any suggestions would really help me with this. Thanks

 

[wolfgirl]

Sounds great

 

[echoey]

As long as your spelling punctuation and grammar is good you will do fine, because that's what english is about haha
But yeah I like the names youve chosen, Bob an Bill, those names make me laugh lol.

 

[ford1001]

lol, and they are aussie names i think

 

[ChrisRedfield1994]

Hey everyone, this has nothing to do about a RE movie but a movie i have to do for english. What do you all think about this for my plot line, its only short

Bill and Jill's [newly weds] lives are torn apart for ever when a Bill is captured by enemy troops in World War 2. Bob [bill's best mate] comfort Jill about the loss of her husband. On the night of Jill and Bob's wedding, Bill [Jill's now thought deceased husband] steps into to claim what's rightfully his.

what do you all think. Its based in Australia and also WW2. Any suggestions would really help me with this. Thanks

Very good premise.
One that's never really been explored.
Are you gonna have like flashback scenes to show the POW?

 

[ford1001]

yeah, its gonna be awesome

 

[Mobe]

yeah, its gud.. da concept is great!

 

[ford1001]

thanks mobe

 

[wpstudart]

Sounds good, hope you get a good grade

 

[ford1001]

thanks everyone